shaolinfingerjabs asked: Hello Mr. Yardin. I don't know if this is the proper way of doing this so please forgive me if I'm stepping over any boundaries here. I am a self-taught would be comic penciller looking for some professional critique of my work. I'm not looking to be hired or anything like that. I already know I'm not ready. But a professional review would be great. This is probably a lot to ask but if you ever find the time please respond to this and I'll gladly give you a link to my work. Thank you! Big fan!
Keep working on your structure and anatomy. It looks like you are already mindful of some of the basics of that, based on the way you are constructing your drawings. Pay attention to some of the smaller muscle groups too, as well as your proportions, and how muscles move with the bones when the body parts change position.